Case Study

Case Study

Case Study

Simplifying Price Messaging to Improve Clarity and Conversion

Brooklinen regularly runs promotions across its site — from sitewide sales to category-specific discounts and limited-time bundles. However, as our promotional strategy matured, our price messaging became fragmented and confusing for users. Multiple pill messages (badges displayed on product cards and PDPs) could appear at once, each referencing different promotions, creating uncertainty about the final price.

To resolve this, we launched a sitewide price messaging simplification initiative, consolidating all active discounts into a single, clear message per product, improving transparency, consistency, and ultimately, conversion.

The Problem

Prior to this initiative, product pages and tiles often displayed multiple discount indicators such as:

  • “20% off with code”

  • “Extra 15% off Last Call”

  • “Bundle & Save”

This created several user experience issues:

  • Message overload: Too many pills cluttered the product card, especially on mobile.

  • Unclear final pricing: Users weren’t sure which discounts were stackable or applied automatically.

  • Inconsistent logic: Different rules drove which pills appeared and when, leading to edge cases and customer service issues.

Ultimately, this undermined user trust, hurt promo performance, and created unnecessary customer support contacts.

Goals
  1. Streamline discount messaging into a single, unified price pill per product.

  2. Clearly communicate the total effective discount the customer will receive.

  3. Build a scalable system that can adapt to future promotion types without overhauling UI each time.

  4. Improve conversion, cart adds, and clarity.

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Key Features
✅ Unified Price Pill
  • A new “All-In-One” discount pill replaced multiple promotional indicators.

  • The message dynamically reflects the best available offer in plain language:

  • Ensures a customer immediately understands the net discount without confusion.

📐 Standardized Pill Hierarchy
  • Built a tiered priority system that resolved which discount message took precedence (e.g., sitewide > category > bundle).

  • Removed conflicting messages and simplified logic across all templates and components.

🌐 Cross-Surface Consistency
  • Ensured the same unified message appeared consistently across:

    • Product listing pages (PLPs)

    • Product detail pages (PDPs)

    • Cart and checkout

Execution
  • Audited all current promotions and messaging surfaces across the site.

  • Partnered with UX to test new pill designs and language variants for clarity and legibility.

  • Worked with engineering to rebuild pill logic into a centralized service that evaluated all active offers and returned one clean message.

  • Validated with A/B testing to measure performance impact before full rollout.

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Key Features
✅ Unified Price Pill
  • A new “All-In-One” discount pill replaced multiple promotional indicators.

  • The message dynamically reflects the best available offer in plain language:

  • Ensures a customer immediately understands the net discount without confusion.

📐 Standardized Pill Hierarchy
  • Built a tiered priority system that resolved which discount message took precedence (e.g., sitewide > category > bundle).

  • Removed conflicting messages and simplified logic across all templates and components.

🌐 Cross-Surface Consistency
  • Ensured the same unified message appeared consistently across:

    • Product listing pages (PLPs)

    • Product detail pages (PDPs)

    • Cart and checkout

Execution
  • Audited all current promotions and messaging surfaces across the site.

  • Partnered with UX to test new pill designs and language variants for clarity and legibility.

  • Worked with engineering to rebuild pill logic into a centralized service that evaluated all active offers and returned one clean message.

  • Validated with A/B testing to measure performance impact before full rollout.

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Key Features
✅ Unified Price Pill
  • A new “All-In-One” discount pill replaced multiple promotional indicators.

  • The message dynamically reflects the best available offer in plain language:

  • Ensures a customer immediately understands the net discount without confusion.

📐 Standardized Pill Hierarchy
  • Built a tiered priority system that resolved which discount message took precedence (e.g., sitewide > category > bundle).

  • Removed conflicting messages and simplified logic across all templates and components.

🌐 Cross-Surface Consistency
  • Ensured the same unified message appeared consistently across:

    • Product listing pages (PLPs)

    • Product detail pages (PDPs)

    • Cart and checkout

Execution
  • Audited all current promotions and messaging surfaces across the site.

  • Partnered with UX to test new pill designs and language variants for clarity and legibility.

  • Worked with engineering to rebuild pill logic into a centralized service that evaluated all active offers and returned one clean message.

  • Validated with A/B testing to measure performance impact before full rollout.

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Results (Post-Launch)
  • +9% lift in overall conversion rate

  • +3% increase in add-to-cart rate during promotional periods

  • -28% reduction in support tickets related to unclear discount application

  • Positive qualitative feedback: "It’s finally clear what deal I’m getting."

Final Thoughts

This initiative demonstrated that small changes in how we communicate pricing can have outsized impacts on customer experience and business performance. By unifying price messaging into a clear, scalable system, we made it easier for customers to understand their savings and built a stronger foundation for future promotions and merchandising flexibility.

Results (Post-Launch)
  • +9% lift in overall conversion rate

  • +3% increase in add-to-cart rate during promotional periods

  • -28% reduction in support tickets related to unclear discount application

  • Positive qualitative feedback: "It’s finally clear what deal I’m getting."

Final Thoughts

This initiative demonstrated that small changes in how we communicate pricing can have outsized impacts on customer experience and business performance. By unifying price messaging into a clear, scalable system, we made it easier for customers to understand their savings and built a stronger foundation for future promotions and merchandising flexibility.

Results (Post-Launch)
  • +9% lift in overall conversion rate

  • +3% increase in add-to-cart rate during promotional periods

  • -28% reduction in support tickets related to unclear discount application

  • Positive qualitative feedback: "It’s finally clear what deal I’m getting."

Final Thoughts

This initiative demonstrated that small changes in how we communicate pricing can have outsized impacts on customer experience and business performance. By unifying price messaging into a clear, scalable system, we made it easier for customers to understand their savings and built a stronger foundation for future promotions and merchandising flexibility.